Corrections

After some very awesome suggestions from the folks at Comics Experience I have reworked this page a bit in photoshop and made some changes for the sake of clarity. Now to step back and look at it from a fresh perspective.
...before moving on to the next thing.

This is a perfect example of why it is really good to get a crit in progress. I might have made these changes earlier on paper and ended up with a nice drawing instead of having to print it from the digital.

You live, you learn.