Corrections

After some very awesome suggestions from the folks at Comics Experience I have reworked this page a bit in photoshop and made some changes for the sake of clarity. Now to step back and look at it from a fresh perspective.
...before moving on to the next thing.

This is a perfect example of why it is really good to get a crit in progress. I might have made these changes earlier on paper and ended up with a nice drawing instead of having to print it from the digital.

You live, you learn.

One page pencils done!

So I'm going to call this a page of finished pencils. It the Chicago Comic Con I chatted up some of the folks at Glass House Studios and saw some pages where the pencils were so tight and right that no inkier was required. Jinky Coronado's Banzai Girl pages are etched in my mind now.
So I got super inspired to try to kick my pencils up a notch.
...just keep swimming, just keep swimming...

Decided to have a go at the Comics Experience August Challenge: The theme - "Birthday," the mission - an original story. This is what I came up with: thumbnailed last night, got this far today with the wacom tablet. The next step would be to print it out and do finished pencils over it on good paper if I were so inclined.

Finished coloring

I am trying this link here to flickr - hope it works:



yes?